There you go! Pictures work! I'd suggest putting the picture links in between paragraphs, though, as they are breaking up the text and making it a little difficult to read
So, first off, since you're building a Pre Vizsla I will link you over the his
CRLs (Costume Requirements List). The tough part about doing a Canon character for your first build is that they are subject to more stringent requirements for you to qualify for Official Membership, so it is wise to have the CRLs for your character at hand to reference as you go along.
Now I'll comment on what you've got going so far
-Your helmet is amazing! Seriously, did you actually scratch build that?! It's one of the best I've seen! 8)
-You already noted that the shoulders aren't the right shape, but I'll also mention that the chest plates are going to have to be changed as well. See the pictures in the linked CRLs and compare.
-I think we'd also appreciate it if we could get a picture of you wearing the plates. With vest would be best, but without is fine as well. I have a feeling the plates may actually be too big for you so it would be good to put that up and let us have a look.
-As you found out, don't mix paint types!
And, hopefully to save you more trouble, it's safest to stick to ONE BRAND of spray paint, too. I like Krylon, but Rustoleum is also popular. Just don't use both.
With how much you've done, and considering how much you would likely have to change to fit into the Pre Vizsla Reqs, do you think it might be worth doing just a random custom Death Watch member to start with, then upgrading/building a Vizsla with the skills you learn later? Not saying that to discourage you! Do what makes you happy! But I thought I'd mention that thought as it will probably be easier, and you will build up experience to do things even better the next time
