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[andyman97]

Hi everyone, I'm Andy and I live in upstate NY. I posted my build thread with the local clan and was told that my build needs fixes though I wasn't told what they are and I should post here for feedback so here it is. Thanks in advance for any feedback.

https://bit.ly/3pYaZ0g


https://bit.ly/3pWPXPu


https://bit.ly/3F5hG52


https://bit.ly/3pWGhEu

[Rayne]

Hi Andy,
Welcome! For some reason the photos aren’t working to take a look at your kit.

[andyman97]

Maybe direct links will work:

https://bit.ly/3pYaZ0g


https://bit.ly/3pWPXPu


https://bit.ly/3F5hG52


https://bit.ly/3pWGhEu

[Tenaz]

Commenting to follow 

[andyman97]

EDIT - I tried linking with imgur as well and they still don't show up.  I'm at a loss.  I'll just post links.
Figured I may as well throw up some additional pics her in case they're needed:

https://photos.app.goo.gl/qPwpyXm5HXhmHQNj7


https://photos.app.goo.gl/EgjxopguB4zdyA3HA

https://photos.app.goo.gl/jt95Fmn5VRUAY8U46

https://photos.app.goo.gl/zRBbhchcY6FsY31D7

https://photos.app.goo.gl/u3oDmjmodrjNEdqn7

https://photos.app.goo.gl/CnXCroXq7wNpkfrn7

FYI, these are the paints I used:
https://photos.app.goo.gl/BmDTGrZfNR1Dp3uEA

[Mi'ix]

Your additional pics didn't come through, unfortunately.

Couple things I'm noting from you kit up pics.

Your soft parts are really baggy which is causing the vest to billow around your abdomen and the thigh plates to droop.

Your flightsuit color would work much better for season 2, which is more brown in color than season one which should be a dark gray.

Cape needs little triangular tatters at the base, but this might be some tricky with the angle of the photos, but it appears a different length. Longer the better for season 1.

I'll have some more feedback once we see what your other pictures look like.

[andyman97]

**FYI - I'm only looking to do basic approval at this point but would welcome suggestions for brigade certification as well

I made quite a few fixes and updates. Hopefully the pics come through this time.

[Mi'ix]

Night and day difference, my man.

Little tweaks now, IMO.

Make sure we can't see your neck under and the sides of your helmet.

Still a little bit of bagginess in the sleeves, but not enough to cause an issue.  Din has that too.

Make sure your apron and cummerbund are on nice and straight.  Looks to be slanting off to your left a little bit.

You made some good progress on the cape, but a little more and we're there!



I know this is the pre-beskar Din, but the same cape appears on your costume as it does on that one!  Make your weathering at the bottom a little tighter and torn like the reference.

If you haven't already, consult your Ruus'alor about how to go about the application process. 

[andyman97]

Awesome, great to hear.  Thanks for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!  I took these about an hour or two into my last troop so stuff had shifted around a touch and my wife shot the pics from lower steps lol.  I am working with my clan to get updated pics and will hopefully get everything in soon!

[andyman97]

Thank you for providing these photos

No problem.  FYI, I wouldn't use the photos that you quoted, I did a LOT of work after initially posting those though the paints are definitely solid choices.