Great job so far, can't wait to troop beside you when we start getting events again.
The few things I have noticed right off the bat. The loin cloth and sash doesn't appear weathered enough to match the rest of the kit. The app team might call it as inconsistent weathering.
The 2 overlapping belts since they are attached to the sash, should technically only count as 1 waist item. In this case a sash, you will need 2 of the 3 waist items, sash/girth-belt , gun belt, or ammo belt. If you don't want to run another belt, I would suggest loading up on a couple of more pouches to the existing "belt" and hang a piece of fabric out from the bottom of one side in the front. This will give the appearance that you have a fabric sash under the leather belt. A friend of mine did it with a leather waist item that he was trying to get approved.
You have some visible bagginess/bunching in the vest and right sleeve, the app team usually calls those items out. This could just be a kit up issue so pay a little attention when you kit up to those areas. But the other issues will most likely get dinged.