well, 11 hours and over 20 views later and you are the only two comments, so I will assume that everyone else is playing the "don't got nothing nice to say don't say nothin at all" game and you have the consensus. I'm a little confused though.
Can I leave you some constructive criticism?
sure! please do!
*smiles sweetly*
Oh osik.. I'm in trouble now... I know that look....

Just the chest piece alone...erm...well, it looks like boob plates
My mother-in-law diplomatically said I have "hanging pecks" so maybe it's my Buddha-like physique making it look like boob plates?

On that note, I'll take note of that though and use the same base template for my wife's kit when I get around to hers.... neither of us are big fans of the torpedo chest plates.
They might be a tad too wide and tall for a male chest
In all serriousness though I think the chest plate is a couple inches or so to wide and I think it needs to be raised about two inches up.
Concensus! I'll look into narrowing them a bit and raising them
Also instead of moving it up you may want to add another inch or two to the chests hieght kinda like you did in the photoshop.
I added almost four inches to the lower portion already [the part that is not blue is manually done] and had planned to add depth/height to the shoulder straps if the placement and sizing was alright, which it sounds not to be.
Thank you both for your advice and input. I don't want to sound/look like I am ignoring the advice but I want to try fitting on some side "straps" for the clamshell look, maybe even building on a backplate into a one-piece upper, just for the practice before starting a new piece... a little extra practice modding/winging it wouldn't hurt. Thanks for being Mando enough to tell me you didn't like it.

Who knows, maybe with the abs, shoulders and clamshell in place it won't look so bad.

I have some time to kill before the new bucket model will be finished so I may as well get some practice in with this guy.
Cheers

Anyone else care to weigh in, please do so. Positive, negative, or "what they said".. it's all beneficial.